Here are the images I showed at the crit:
The tutor helpfully pointed out that I could rearrange the text on the Photography page. He said that I could make it into two separate columns to get rid of the large paragraph under the picture of Leibovitz. I think it’s a good idea and I will make that change.
I asked if the tutors thought the last column on the right should be moved over further to the right. I was glad that they didn’t feel this was necessary.
So now I need to get on with the front page and the Beauty page. I will also finish off the pages above. I will then get some more feedback.